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And so this side story starts immediately after the finish to the Crown Royal 400 at Indianapolis Motor Speedway;
Even though it was Grim who stole the show by winning his 3rd consecutive race, he will not mentioned any further in this chapter. We'll first focus on Bart Simpson, who has been feeling very betrayed for awhile now. Ever since Twilight Sparkle, one of his best friends, found out that the colt on whom she'd been crushing was now engaged to be married to her own former arch-enemy, she had gone on a major mean streak, taking out other characters left, right and center in subsequent races; and her most recent victim was none other than Bart's own father, Homer Simpson, whom she took out by casting a spell to blow up his engine. Such is the incident that has Bart feeling hurt, as he is on his way to confront Twilight on this issue when his sister Lisa spots him;
"Bart, what's goin' on?"
"I'm gonna go talk to Twilight about what she did to Dad."
"Uh, are you sure that's a good idea? You know how mean she's become lately."
"How would you know?"
"Rainbow Dash and the other ponies told me about how her crush is engaged to someone else," Lisa admits. "But if you're still intent on facing her, let me help you; this is likely a girl thing anyway, so I think you'd best let me handle that, okay?"
"Uh, sure. Whatever you say, Lis." So, with the two siblings in agreeance, Bart and Lisa walk side-by-side towards the #11 garage, where Twilight is currently pacing impatiently back and forth...
"Hey, Twilight!" Bart barks.
"What, Bart?!?" Twilight scoffs nonchalantly.
"You know what!" Bart snaps. "What the hell you were thinking, taking out our dad like that? Just because you lost your lousy boyfriend doesn't mean you can just take it out on the rest of us, you know!"
"You don't know crap from Snickers!" Twilight snarls. "Flash Sentry loved me! ME!! I knew it from the way he looked at me and talked to me. And then that bitch Sunset just stole him away, and God only knows what's she gonna do with him and... UGH!!!" She roars as she stomps her hooves on the pavement in disgust.
"Uh, I'm gonna tag out, Lis," whispers Bart to his sister.
"Look, Twilight," Lisa pleads. "Bart and I have both had nasty breakups ourselves, so we know what it's like."
"Yeah," comes an off-handed reply from Bart. "As if school weren't bad enough..."
"We're still young, and so are you. Honestly, I don't think either myself or Bart have a chance at finding... 'the one,' but someone as bright as you certainly will."
Twilight's face contorts into an angry scowl, both ends of her teeth grinding against each other. "What don't you two morons get?!? Flash was the one and Sunset stole him from me! So your argument's completely useless! Now get lost," she added venomously, "before I'll give you a Cruciatus Curse you'll never forget..."
Knowing full well of her readiness, willingless and ableness to torture them, Bart and Lisa are quick to back down and flee, leaving Twilight to rage uninterrupted.
"I don't get it, Lis," Bart sighs. "Twilight's normally so nice, now she's mean to everyone. I really think I'm losing my friend!"
"It's okay, Bart," Lisa assures him. "You still have me and the other ponies... as for Twilight, well I never thought I'd say this, but maybe if she found a new boyfriend, it might turn her around."
"I don't know," Bart sighs dejectedly as the two trudge back to the motorhome...
Even though it was Grim who stole the show by winning his 3rd consecutive race, he will not mentioned any further in this chapter. We'll first focus on Bart Simpson, who has been feeling very betrayed for awhile now. Ever since Twilight Sparkle, one of his best friends, found out that the colt on whom she'd been crushing was now engaged to be married to her own former arch-enemy, she had gone on a major mean streak, taking out other characters left, right and center in subsequent races; and her most recent victim was none other than Bart's own father, Homer Simpson, whom she took out by casting a spell to blow up his engine. Such is the incident that has Bart feeling hurt, as he is on his way to confront Twilight on this issue when his sister Lisa spots him;
"Bart, what's goin' on?"
"I'm gonna go talk to Twilight about what she did to Dad."
"Uh, are you sure that's a good idea? You know how mean she's become lately."
"How would you know?"
"Rainbow Dash and the other ponies told me about how her crush is engaged to someone else," Lisa admits. "But if you're still intent on facing her, let me help you; this is likely a girl thing anyway, so I think you'd best let me handle that, okay?"
"Uh, sure. Whatever you say, Lis." So, with the two siblings in agreeance, Bart and Lisa walk side-by-side towards the #11 garage, where Twilight is currently pacing impatiently back and forth...
"Hey, Twilight!" Bart barks.
"What, Bart?!?" Twilight scoffs nonchalantly.
"You know what!" Bart snaps. "What the hell you were thinking, taking out our dad like that? Just because you lost your lousy boyfriend doesn't mean you can just take it out on the rest of us, you know!"
"You don't know crap from Snickers!" Twilight snarls. "Flash Sentry loved me! ME!! I knew it from the way he looked at me and talked to me. And then that bitch Sunset just stole him away, and God only knows what's she gonna do with him and... UGH!!!" She roars as she stomps her hooves on the pavement in disgust.
"Uh, I'm gonna tag out, Lis," whispers Bart to his sister.
"Look, Twilight," Lisa pleads. "Bart and I have both had nasty breakups ourselves, so we know what it's like."
"Yeah," comes an off-handed reply from Bart. "As if school weren't bad enough..."
"We're still young, and so are you. Honestly, I don't think either myself or Bart have a chance at finding... 'the one,' but someone as bright as you certainly will."
Twilight's face contorts into an angry scowl, both ends of her teeth grinding against each other. "What don't you two morons get?!? Flash was the one and Sunset stole him from me! So your argument's completely useless! Now get lost," she added venomously, "before I'll give you a Cruciatus Curse you'll never forget..."
Knowing full well of her readiness, willingless and ableness to torture them, Bart and Lisa are quick to back down and flee, leaving Twilight to rage uninterrupted.
"I don't get it, Lis," Bart sighs. "Twilight's normally so nice, now she's mean to everyone. I really think I'm losing my friend!"
"It's okay, Bart," Lisa assures him. "You still have me and the other ponies... as for Twilight, well I never thought I'd say this, but maybe if she found a new boyfriend, it might turn her around."
"I don't know," Bart sighs dejectedly as the two trudge back to the motorhome...
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Twilight has really become an object of pure hatred. Not even Lisa's advice can calm this vicious Princess. 
A slight edit I've made for you, just to expand the vocab and the like:
"I'm gonna go talk to Twilight about what she pulled on Dad."
"Uh, I'm gonna tag out, Lis," whispers Bart to his sister.
"Look, Twilight," Lisa pleads. "Bart and I have both had nasty breakups ourselves, so we know what it's like."
"Yeah," comes an off-handed reply from Bart. "As if school weren't bad enough..."
"We're still young, and so are you. Honestly, I don't think either myself or Bart have a chance at finding... 'the one,' but someone as bright as you certainly will."
Twilight's face contorts into an angry scowl, both ends of her teeth grinding against each other. "What don't you two morons get?!? Flash was the one and Sunset stole him from me! So your argument's completely useless! Now get lost," she added venomously, "before I'll give you a Cruciatus Curse you'll never forget..."
A slight edit I've made for you, just to expand the vocab and the like:
"I'm gonna go talk to Twilight about what she pulled on Dad."
"Uh, I'm gonna tag out, Lis," whispers Bart to his sister.
"Look, Twilight," Lisa pleads. "Bart and I have both had nasty breakups ourselves, so we know what it's like."
"Yeah," comes an off-handed reply from Bart. "As if school weren't bad enough..."
"We're still young, and so are you. Honestly, I don't think either myself or Bart have a chance at finding... 'the one,' but someone as bright as you certainly will."
Twilight's face contorts into an angry scowl, both ends of her teeth grinding against each other. "What don't you two morons get?!? Flash was the one and Sunset stole him from me! So your argument's completely useless! Now get lost," she added venomously, "before I'll give you a Cruciatus Curse you'll never forget..."